Wednesday, December 30, 2009

... आज की एक त्रिवेणी....

आज भी वह पुरानी बुरी आदत नहीं बदली,
आज भी में उसके कारन बदनाम हूँ,

न जाने कितने वादे भुलाये , न जाने कितने दिल तोड़े।

5 comments:

  1. triveni kya hoti hai??? poem consisting of three lines?? i dont want to get into definition(s) lekin yeh term itni baar is blog par aayi hai ki i am curious.

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  2. lolz... yeah it is a three line poem. Read Gulzar's triveni's you will love them . :)

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  3. triveni kya hai..gulzaar ke shabdon mein
    Shuru shuru mein jab ye form banaai thi, to pata nahin tha yeh kis sangam tak pahunchegi - Triveni naam isliye diya tha, ki pahle do misre, Ganga Jamuna ki tarah milte hain, aur ek khayal, ek sher ko mukammil karte hain. Lekin in do dharaon ke neeche ek aur nadi hai - Saraswati. Jo gupt hai. Nazar nahin aati; Triveni ka kaam saraswati dikhana hai. Teesara misra, kahin pahle do misron mein gupt hai. Chhupa hua hai

    1972/73 mein Jab Kamleshwar Saarika ke editor the, Triveniyan Saarika mein chhapti rahi, aur ab -

    Triveni ko baaligh hote, 27-28 saal lag gaye....

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  4. well written POETESS, keep it up

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  5. अब ना तोड़ना दिल किसी का. न अपना-न ग़ैरों का. अच्छी बात नहीं.

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